diff --git a/docs/wiki-demo-article.md b/docs/wiki-demo-article.md
index b9e35b3..75f6a51 100644
--- a/docs/wiki-demo-article.md
+++ b/docs/wiki-demo-article.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ when writing new entries.
 ## Inline Formatting
 
 Body text supports **bold**, *italic*, ***bold italic***, ~~strikethrough~~,
-and `inline code`. You can also link out — internally with wikilinks like
+and `inline code`. You can link internally with wikilinks like
 [[Campaigns]], [[Missions|mission index]], and [[Factions|faction dossiers]],
 or externally to the [Arma 3 website](https://arma3.com).
 
@@ -46,11 +46,11 @@ cover most editorial needs.
 
 > "We don't fight for the flag on the map. We fight so the person to your
 > left goes home."
-> — Colonel Vasquez, briefing before Ashfall
+> Colonel Vasquez, briefing before Ashfall
 
 ## Code
 
-Inline commands like `hint "Hello world";` sit comfortably in prose. Fenced
+Inline commands like `hint "Hello world";` can appear in body text. Fenced
 blocks get their own container:
 
 ```sqf
@@ -80,14 +80,14 @@ briefs.
 
 #### This is an H4
 
-H4 is the deepest level — use it for granular notes like per-team frequency
+H4 is the deepest level. Use it for granular notes like per-team frequency
 assignments.
 
 ## Callouts
 
 :::note
 Night operations require NVGs distributed at gear check. Ask logistics the
-evening before — supply will not break out NVGs after 2100.
+evening before; supply will not break out NVGs after 2100.
 :::
 
 :::warning
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ escort. Last sweep found three APERS bouncing Betties at the tree line.
 
 ## Infobox
 
-The infobox is a template — insert `{{Infobox}}` near the top of an article
+The infobox is a template. Insert `{{Infobox}}` near the top of an article
 body (after creating the template from `docs/wiki-infobox-template.md`) and
 it renders as a floated right-hand info card:
 
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ it renders as a floated right-hand info card:
 | Conflict          | Southern Campaign |
 | Theater           | Altis, northern coast |
 | Dates             | 12–19 Mar 2035 |
-| Outcome           | Decisive — airfield secured |
+| Outcome           | Decisive, airfield secured |
 | Strength          | 2x fireteams, 2x rotary |
 
 A week-long clearing operation to seize the northern airfield and deny
@@ -125,13 +125,13 @@ lead section. On narrow screens the card drops to full width.
 
 ::::columns
 :::column
-**Left column — Ground plan.** Alpha and Bravo advance along the western
+**Left column: Ground plan.** Alpha and Bravo advance along the western
 tree line, using the low rock walls as cover. Expect contact at the first
 stone bridge.
 :::
 
 :::column
-**Right column — Air plan.** Reaper 6 orbits south at 800 m for overwatch.
+**Right column: Air plan.** Reaper 6 orbits south at 800 m for overwatch.
 Dagger 1 holds at Landing Zone Hawk until the ground element calls the
 push.
 :::
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ green panel.
 
 Captioned images render the caption as a hover title:
 
-![An aerial reconnaissance photo of the objective](/images/logo.webp "AO recon — taken by Reaper 6 at 0642")
+![An aerial reconnaissance photo of the objective](/images/logo.webp "AO recon, taken by Reaper 6 at 0642")
 
 ## Footnotes
 
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ Use a rule to separate major sections of long articles.
 - Image uploads happen through the editor toolbar (this demo links an
   existing file).
 - `{{Template}}` placeholders expand at render time, but only if a template
-  with a matching name exists in the wiki template list — this article
+  with a matching name exists in the wiki template list. This article
   intentionally skips one so you can see the fallback behavior with
   `{{NonexistentTemplate}}`.
 - HTML is not rendered; raw tags appear as literal text.